Obviously

Liking and thinking

Closing my eyes

Unconscious writing…

Have I said too much?

Am I too obvious?

Idolising the sentence

Oblivious character

Deviant eyes

The complexity

That every lie implies

Am I too obvious about you?

About how you make me feel

With your distance and your own tragedy

With your passion and your alluring smile

With your delight after running the miles…

12 Comments Add yours

  1. Oh.. You are amazing.. You’ve expressed it beautifully

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    1. lynyo says:

      Oh dear! I don’t know what to say! That someone with your smarts and talent could write something like this about what I wrote, really means a lot!
      Obviously, I’m forever thankful for your support and kindness

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      1. You are on the go..! Just keep writing and go from better to best.. I compared my fist post with my latest.. Do that and you know how you go.. Always love your lines.. 😀

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      2. lynyo says:

        This explains so much!
        Thanks for the tip, I’ll do so!
        You are great!

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      3. So are you my dear friend

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  2. Ananya says:

    That’s really good. You are so good at this..great job 👌👌

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    1. lynyo says:

      Thank you for all your encouragement! I hope I can keep up the expectations

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      1. Ananya says:

        Yes. You did and I believe you’ll in future..Keep going like this..
        And you derserve this..you are very good.. pleasure!.😊

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      2. lynyo says:

        Thank you once again!😀

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      3. Ananya says:

        Oh.. It’s my pleasure always! 😊👍

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      4. lynyo says:

        😀👍🏿

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